Abyssic Dream.. a love song for the lost

[larva]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kIjkgKyHr9E

A sad song written for the end of my beautiful love story..

 

[xfigox]

Pretty cool song, needs more work on the distorted guitars though.

Vocals are a little pitchy, especially during the starting verses, drums kinda got lost in the mix towards the end, hats can be heard but the kick lacks the click to cut through the mix, maybe you can make some space for the kick's low end but adding some low pass filters on the other stuffs.

Bass sounds pretty good though.