bro i think your song is good.. i like the arrangements/structures.. you've some killer headbangable riffs and endless melodies.. catchy, brutal yet melodic..!
I recalled visiting your MySpace site ages ago and enjoyed your stuff. You've got lots of potential as a guitarist and a songwriter - hope things work out for you.
thank you for all your kind words man. glad u all liked it. it was juz guitars n keyboard drums. perhaps when i am free again i'd do bass n keys too n upload it back into myspace.