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Old 15-10-07, 12:57 PM
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Song Title : Radio Chip
Singer & Songwriter : Geraldine Png

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Lyrics :

One Strange Morning as I watched the news
The anchorman anchored news I could not believe!
It said everyone's gotta be chipped
I was like what the .....!!!!!

The TV said...It's an order for a one world temple
It's the order for chaos
We are doing it for peace and security
Don't be afraid
We come in peace


You can't buy, You can't sell
Not without the radio chip
Put your good right hand out
Or...Put your good forehead in


They say it's got rewards and security
That it's common sense
That it's the 'In' Thing
That it's hip and cool


I ask....do I have a choice?
But I don't want a strange mark in my hand
Do I have a choice?
Maybe it causes a noisome and grievous sore
Do I have a choice?
Do I have to worship an image? That sucks!
Oh No! Here comes Big Brother!
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love the lyrics but i couldnt stand that part where there was this weird voice coming on. Just didnt suit it. I also noticed there was no bass track. Sounded very empty. But overall i still think it was a good effort, just need some minor improvements. You have a pretty decent voice though.
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Woah, is this about the Book of Revelations in the bible?
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You have a decent voice.
But honestly.... this song, in my opinion, it's very awkward and I can't see anyone taking it seriously.
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Hi there dear all,

Yes, it is in relation to the chapters of Ezekiel, Daniel & Revelation of The Holy Bible.

The alien voice represents The Anti-Christ who will come after the First Rapture (Pre-Tribulation Rapture). The Anti-Christ & False Prophet will rule for 7 years.

Radio Chip = RFID Biochip = Mark Of The Beast = Revelation Chapter 13

References To The Holy Bible : http://etext.lib.virginia.edu/kjv.browse.html

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The lyrics sound really out of place when sung. And "that sucks!" sounded weird too. But I'm sure you can work on it. I liked the weird robo-voice.
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I don't know about this...

I think the song needs some serious rewriting. There's potential though.
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Personally I think its more suited for a concept album, kinda reminds me of Pink Floyd's The Wall or even Tommy by The Who
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Yes. My Moonstone City Demo Album was a concept album conceptualized back in the year 2003....and my demo singles which I have been cooking and whipping up will gradually be another concept demo album.....

I'm pretty glad that I had set myself free by simply writing original music and allowing others to download and continue to create again and again.....it took me awhile to get to this mental and hearty stage as an artiste....letting go off the bondages of the carnal world.

And it is more joyous and fun not pressurizing yourself to any critic or record label contract, etc. Perhaps this is maturity...slowly creating your own niche following.

Media be it TV, internet or the radio is fairly alright but it is unhealthy if you allow them to dictate to you your lifestyle or craft (be it making music, a movie or writing a book, etc.).

Do not allow your mindset be limited to what is being portrayed in the media.....or controlled by the few people who control media hubs be it advertisements, etc.

That is why many people tend to buy or... think they need to use or hear or watch things they do not even need because they could not discern for themselves what Truth is....they can't step out of their confined boundaries as they are always dictated and they have difficulties exploring their inner capabilities to do a bit more which they actually can achieve if only they try to step out of their confined boundaries.

Media enslaves people by making them feel bad about themselves and make them feel inadequate....or shoot them into a 'Guilt' ridden trip.

Life on earth is temporal and had been slowly setting myself free from carnal things on earth....I am into a New Heaven....set free in Jesus Christ. Maturity in Christ. Conditioning of The Heart & Mind in Christ Jesus. Period.

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Hi there dear all,

Yes, it is in relation to the chapters of Ezekiel, Daniel & Revelation of The Holy Bible.

The alien voice represents The Anti-Christ who will come after the First Rapture (Pre-Tribulation Rapture). The Anti-Christ & False Prophet will rule for 7 years.

Radio Chip = RFID Biochip = Mark Of The Beast = Revelation Chapter 13

References To The Holy Bible : http://etext.lib.virginia.edu/kjv.browse.html
This theory may be popular among professing evangelicals and charismatics in America but that doesn't make correct as it requires taking scripture out of it's context and read your own interpretation into it.
And as far as the RFID chips, you show you have no understanding of how the technology works.
It seems this song is just propaganda to promote an unbiblical delusion and paranoia.
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